I'm still seeing problems with your journals. The easiest fix needed is identifying each part specifically. Also, there's no need for a separate page for your source ID. What I'm still noticing in the analysis section is you are writing your own argument, pulling on information from the article you have chosen. That is not the assignment. That is what you will be doing when you write your researched argument. You know, that long paper I've assigned? You're supposed to be looking at your chosen sources carefully; after doing so you should be writing an analysis of the argument presented in the source. Begin with the author's main claim. Think about whether or not it is supported well. Look at the kinds of evidence used. Are there any fallacies found in this evidence? Is the evidence credible? Does it support the main argument? These are the kinds of things you should be using for your focus in this p...
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